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Old 05-03-2013, 04:38 PM   #1
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Homeworld - Journey (стихотворение)

Я написал стихотворение, которое хотел бы видеть как слова к финальной песне моего личного, воображаемого Homeworld 3. Так же предлагаю вам прослушать несколько композиций, которые должны дать должное впечатление о том, как представляю себе песню на эти слова.

Естественно, песня из оригинальной игры "Homeworld" by Yes.

"Isis and Osiris" by Ayreon (хотя, для должного впечатления, я рекомендовал бы прослушать весь первый диск альбома "Into The Electric Castle")

"The Sixth Exctinction" by Ayreon (Внимание! Спойлеры истории всего альбома)

Ну и, собственно, само стихотворение за авторством меня:

Lust...
For knowledge of all,
And there is no price,
Which we won’t call
Just...

Lost...
Among countless stars,
Home is a place,
For which we dream
Most...

Is this the destiny of men
To always wish for better land?
Can our spirits cease this chase,
Or will we lost ourselves in space?

Knowing no rest,
You embark on new quest,
In the eye of the storm,
Beyond the edge of known world.

And abandoning peace,
Disregarding the risks,
You follow my trail
Through outer space`s veil.

The Journey has begun,
And Truth will be found.
We can’t turn back now,
Hoping for a new dawn.

Behold...
It`s a Cradle of Life,
Forgotten and lost,
Which mystery I strive
To Unfold...

Cold...
It`s death`s silent breeze.
In this final moments,
Take my hand, please
Hold...

Look at the Stars around,
Can you hear their song?
Our Fate they call so loud,
That we denied so long!

We must complete the cycle,
Transcend this mortal world,
Where our lives froze idle,
And take a step, which was foretold

It`s light everywhere... Which i see without eyes,
For we are Stars now, shining high in the skies.
And we will guide our people back to their home.
From now and forevermore, they won’t be alone...

P.S. По требованию трудящихся, могу вкратце описать сюжет, по которому написано стихотворение.
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Old 05-03-2013, 09:07 PM   #2
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Re: Homeworld - Journey (стихотворение)

Очень на The Ladder похоже по стилистике, по построению самого текста.

Мне понравилось, хотелось бы таки услышать вышеупомянутый сюжет.
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